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Reviews For: The Dark Descent
Complex 2004-09-02 . chapter 1
Your discriptions are so vivid. I liked the lines, 'A token of a different world above ground,' and 'The spray from tiny droplets which have scattered from their impact.'
Emi Amara 2004-06-19 . chapter 1
hiya!! great poem :)
Spanish Amor 2004-06-08 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT
im not exaclty fond of the ocean but its very nice
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