 a silenced revolution 2007-02-12 . chapter 1Quite haunting and beautiful. Not really a haiku though. I love it. |
 Plinky 2005-11-28 . chapter 1Lovely.
Just lovely. |
 grim-dreamer 2005-03-09 . chapter 1I was drawn to the number... You'd go that extra floor down? Ouch. |
 Syair 2005-01-15 . chapter 1This one struck me to the face.I cannot describe feeling with words - no, none of those frequently used in reviews, although my heart still can feel. A very strong poem. It left me speechless. I wish I had more words which I can use to describe. - Hanyun |
 Bakedo no Hikage 2004-12-10 . chapter 1Short n Sweet! I, for one, suck at poetry...but that's why people like you are here! |
 catseyeview 2004-10-24 . chapter 1This is so simple, yet complex at the same time. I love the simplicity of words on the complex, makes love sound so easy. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-10-14 . chapter 1First, amazing poem! That's really sweet and makes you think and all. I loved it. Short and to the point.
Second, thanks for your review! Is nice to get such a tohught out and all review than the usual "oh this is good review my stuff back" thing. I hate that. In reply;
I get that many reviews by... I dunno really. Reviewing random people a lot a lot a lot, having friends on the site as well, ... I'm not sure. But thanks!
And thanks for the suggestions about my poem. The reason each verse began with "I" was because I was given the first 2 words of each line and told to write what comes to me. So I worked with that. And my poem is what came out. I too find it odd with the same word beginning each line...
Thanks again! And keep writing, I like it! |
 nine iron 2004-10-13 . chapter 1Oh, good poem!
It is really lovely to read over and over.
Keep writing
Nine Iron |
 Zoey7 2004-06-08 . chapter 1very inspiring. there is no simpler way to describe love. keep writing your poems! |
 LaChoclaNilla 2004-06-08 . chapter 1You put the meaning of love in a 14-word poem. It's short and simple, and it has a strong meaning behind it. I love it! |