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| Exiled-Knight 2004-07-31 ch 1,   | Good poem, I can relate to that from when I was younger and an easy target. Great job on this. Keep Writing |
| Romulan Empress 2004-06-08 ch 1, | That is so me! That is so you! That is so us! Wait... what are our names again? LOL Keep writing; I love it! BTW, I am listening to a quarrel between the Sierra Mist and the swiss cheese. They just broke up. LMAO! |
| YourIMFriendWhoIsNotNiceEno... 2004-06-08 ch 1, | Damn, this one almost made me cry...Oh my god...Sorry, I got sort of worked up, I was feeling a little down today, although that might not be apparent in the IMing I've been doing! So many exclamation marx! ! ! I hate people who persecute you. Lately, this one bastard Charles has been trash-talking me EVERY damn day, and I can never do anything about it. And when I DO say something back, no one listens, they just tell me to shut-up. And I see the flashback to your OWN life in this one. It's totally apparent here, with the "making friends with the wall." We're just martyrs of a cruel society, and there's nothing we can do about it. Wow, what I said had NOTHING to do with the Titans, except maybe a little with Raven...I mean, I get carried away over anything! Anyways, it really broke me up inside, I really thought I was going to cry. Which is a good thing, because an incredible poet is always able to move her readers to enormous emotional extents, which is just what you did here. I loved it...well, I could barely read it, my eyes were teary, and the screen was a blur! ^_^ Well, it was an amazing poem, and I hope you consider putting it in your great works! The dialogue part was inciteful, as well. Not many people have the ability to rhyme speech! You've got a gift! Water it, and watch it grow! Peace out! |