|Reviews for Everything Gone Down|
| rock 'n' roll junkie 12/12/04 . chapter 4
Yay, another romantic story from you! How wonderful. I look forward to updates. Keep up the fabulous work!
| Jolly B 8/18/04 . chapter 4
aww that was cute. i like it. update!
| Cliffe 7/27/04 . chapter 4
I hate to say this, darling, but this seems like it was perfectly planned out.
I like the red flags you put up early on that help us, as readers, understand everything a little better. That's your attention to detail, which I loved in your previous story, too.
You are captivating because of your excellent use of words. Your adjectives aren't lame (i.e. 'crisp white snow') which is so common in good writers- they don't know when to stop.
I guess you learn that by about 19, hm?
or ..how old are you?
I like that she didn't go up with him. It leaves more plot to be explored.
I appreciate your writing. Tell me whenever it's updated, and KEEP WRITING!
| Truebop 7/9/04 . chapter 3
Ah! You impress me once again, my favorite little author. I love your style and creativity. Just one bit of advice, never stop writing no matter what happens in your life. This writing is a talent and a privilege so share it with the world.
| BellezAzul 7/3/04 . chapter 3
Yes, I can definitely tell what's going on here. Very good chapter! I don't know what write in the review cause I am talking to you right now, so yeah... But you know I love your writing and I know what you are feeling but it's all right, k? :o) Everything will be fine, promise!
| NeWriter 6/10/04 . chapter 2
It's interesting... mmph. I was expecting that sort of thing as a reason. I think it just describes the character a bit more. Sorry, but I have to go! Hopefully I'll be able to give you more of my thoughts next chapter ;)
| Gloria-Krasy 6/9/04 . chapter 1
That Ella sounds like a weird girl/woman (we still don't know how old she is, after all), why does she remind me of someone? OK, enough stupidity of my side.
You are good at descriptions and it's an interesting beginning. I'm intrigued by what you keep in store for your anxious readers.
You'd better write in every free minute you have (I'm sure this story will be just as successful as AYIS).
Good job so far, don't stop, we are all waiting. -
| NeWriter 6/9/04 . chapter 1
I found that it was a very good introduction although I was left to some mystery in the end. I like the descriptions you put in the beginning and the way you managed to go through the character's process of realization. I'm also curious at what you have in mind for this plot. Well, see you next chapter :p!
| louragan 6/8/04 . chapter 1
Hahaha! Lovely start to a story. I chuckled at how it ended. Nice mood transition from happy to confused to sad to funny!