wow, that was awesome, another two good chapters. really good imagery too!

im rather intrigued by this. you havent updated for quite a while so i hope you havent stopped writing

i really like this story and you probably get this alot but everytime i read lycan i picture kate beckinsale playing otu one of the scenes with her silly action moves. Its actually kind of surreal that this has been written by someone so young...i dont mean to patronize you or sound condescending but i dont really know how else to say it.

i do like it but there are some grammatical errors and some words have been used out of context but its not screaming out 'i need to be fixed' so it doesnt really matter.

also there isnt much sense of emotion either. Like you'll know whether a situation is sad or happy but you cant really tell what the characters are feeling, was this intentional?

(with the risk of sounding like a teeny-bopping freak)hurry up with the next installment!

This is a great story. I having been reading it since the beginning adn cannot wait for more. Maybe if Underworld was half as good as this I would have enjoyed the movie.

as always, very very good descriptions...i liked the twist at the end

good chapter. put the next one up soon.

Good story, great developments, and I hope you update this soon.

Kool, please write more soon.

pretty cool...cant wait for you to write more...my favorite line: "Isn't strange when you are drunk everyone else around you also seems to have a drunken logic?"

Amazing. Im looking forward to the next few chapters. Awsome, keep writing.

Wow, this is a pretty good story. I love anything with werewolves most of the time. Vampire stories are ok in small doses but a lot of people seem to overuse them. You've done the opposite and gave this story a bit of a twist. I like the descriptions and everything. Hope to see something very similar to this in the near future from you!

Dude thats awsome. i cant wait till the next few chapters get done, its a must read for anyone looking for a good action story. Great job.

nice chapter... keep writing

Incredible Sotry and I can't wait for more. Alos this story has inspired me to make the character of my next story an assassin.

good chapter. post another.
la

good chapter. post another.
la