This is awesome. The imagery is amazing. Please do keep writing!

It IS one of your best. Very good, very good! Great imagery.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

Wow! amazing, vivid, wonderful word choice, i love your titles. i really love the ending.

O_O You have HOW many poems?
I like this one... it creates such vivid visualizations, I swear I could just paint it now...
Beautiful emotions!

The wording of this poem is wonderful and the beauty of it all is amazing. I've read many of your poems and I've come to the conclusion that you are a hugely talented writer. :)

that was so pretty! I think this is one of my faves of urs now. It just flowed so smoothly and so beautifully that I just stared at it for a few seconds.
*gives u hersheys kiss*

that was absolutely lovely, awesome job! i thought your rhyming was amazing, and the whole poem had a very nice flow to it, and i loved the lines "Gasp and choke as I'm forced to drink/Absinthe and ambrosia mixed with decay"

Oh!
Its so pretty, Mudds!
I'm glad you like this one, because I absolutely love it.
It kicks so many levels of ** that its amazing!
The wait was worth it!

I especially love the first two and last two lines.. The whole poem was awesome though. Well done.