|Reviews for Escaping Ellery|
| Spurlunk 6/14/09 . chapter 8
Awesome story so far, interesting idea and you've executed it well. I'm eager to read what you do next!
Great job, keep it up!
| October Autumn 2/21/09 . chapter 1
Love your story,hope you update soon(:
| Reflecti0ns 4/11/06 . chapter 8
| lilleo 2/28/05 . chapter 8
hey, ir eally like this story. it is an intresting idea and not so crazy that it could never happen for all we know it could. keep it up!
| lindserly 1/25/05 . chapter 8
Can't wait for an update
| lindserly 1/23/05 . chapter 1
Hey I chose to read this one today cuz it sounded really interesting from the summary. I think it's a really great idea, and I remember wondering when I was younger what it would be like to in all essence be in another person's body. Oh and I just wanted to say that the premise reminds me of the show "the secret world of alex mack". This is different though I just associated them together for some reason, i think it's because she was a teenage girl with a supernatural secret as well. I don't know if you ever saw it. Okay back to reading :)
| bfmusashi 1/19/05 . chapter 8
thanks a bunch for your always-consistent reviews...they really mean a lot to me and i greatly appreciate them so much. :) ah, and you updated this! sorry for taking so long to review it. anyhow, i like how the story is going, and i found my description of meditation highly intriguing, not to mention pretty accurate, because i've meditated before and the sensation that you feel is often pretty similar, or at least comparable, to what elle felt... the prospect of her learning how to control her powers is an exciting one, so please write more soon.
| bfmusashi 9/25/04 . chapter 7
nice chapter! i really like how you described ellery's emotional distress at having one of her best friends turn away from her. the whole situation, expressed from her point of view with her feelings voiced, is very believable. also...that whole scene with bergman was freakin cute. i've been in the same spot myself, sort of...ahahahahaha. write more soon
| RedRumMurder 9/20/04 . chapter 1
Hey this is cool! I've got to read this sometime or have I said this already... anyway the first chapters awesome though.
I just updated. It's just so difficult to stay away from fiction press. Took your advice and made a very BIG change. Hope you like it.
| bfmusashi 8/30/04 . chapter 6
ack, nice chapter! tough situation to be in, having to explain something like that to your friends...you did a great job of communicating their confusion as well as the whole awkwardness of the entire situation. really good stuff...i cant wait to see what's going to happen next. btw, the lines where elle's mother was interrogating her in the hospital were hilarious. "do you do drugs?" "are you pregnant?" HAHAHHA wow, so believable too. great work!
| That'sNotMe 8/27/04 . chapter 4
yay! Aw, Ben. He's cool. Poor boy... lol. Pretty much all I can do is repeat myself, at this point, so see previous review, hehe. I really love this story.
| That'sNotMe 8/27/04 . chapter 3
I didn't know you'd added to this! I like this chapter. Her mom reminds me of someone - oh, right! My mom. lol. but the characters are great. I really like Maddy, and Dana is cool in an she's-an-obnoxious-older-sister way. Your writing definitely has three dimensions; something not found all the time on this site. Keep it up!
okay... I'm on to chapter 4.
| Clodhopper 8/22/04 . chapter 5
hey...i was wondering...can the person who's mind she's momentarily infiltraited sense her at all? i mean, they're obviously thinking things at the same time and she's very passed out so it isnt like they just stopped existing or did a Freaky Friday act...so do they have no sense that she's chillin' in their mind with 'em?
this was another good chapter. long but good, i liked it a lot. i'm not so sure im partial to Mack, but hey. this is so well written, too, it really is. very impressive. way to be.
Mack (as in Mack-enzie)
| Clodhopper 8/22/04 . chapter 3
really good second chapter, i liked how u mingled the details of the mother. she sounds nutty, overtime. good descriptions, i cant think of any cc as of this time. fun story also, i'll be interesting to get to know Ben, i think.
| Clodhopper 8/22/04 . chapter 2
the first chapter was very good, interesting intro. - srry forgot to review it.
this chapter was really interesting, i liked the description of Maddy and Dana. they seemed realistic and interesting. i also was extremely intrigued by the whole idea of the plot, the walking in other people's shoes idea. when she did flip i thought you did a really good job of showing her confusion. plus how half the flash she herself was annoyed but it was also the other person's emotions and how they got all jumbled...i will continue reading now