Reviews for Modern day Senorita

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Saranya 2008-07-23 ch 28,	Oh yeah, for the last chapter, you spelt Bondi wrong, it's Bondi, not Bondai. And Queensland is KNOWN for its beaches!! It's called the Sunshine Coast for a reason. Beaches there are so much nicer than Sydney's. And a bit less crowded too.
Saranya 2008-07-23 ch 27,	I love how you describe Sydney Harbour in the last chapter, it really is pretty, it just loses its appeal when you have to take the train past it twice a day =P. And how exactly does Luna Park seem big if they come from Queensland, the land of Theme parks? Dreamworld's broken quite a few records with its rides, and Movie world and Wet n Wild are pretty good too. We go THERE when we want good theme parks, Luna Park is really quite lame, nothing there is actually the least bit scary. Well not for me, anyway, but then again, I love my rollercoasters.
Saranya 2008-07-22 ch 14,	A) The song by Wheatus is just called "Teenage Dirtbag". and B) It is NOT techno, it's rock.
Embarr 2008-07-15 ch 40,	I really like this story, but there were a few incongruencies that bugged me. I know you said you were going to re write it so I am sure you will catch all these anyway, but the major ones for me were Ms and Mrs Cunningham when you previously stated that the grandmother was the mother's mother and in the very last chapter, you wrote "...recently recovered from a horrific bus crash that took the life of his half-brother...", when he didn't die at all - wasn't he the one that helped pull people out of the bus? Or this could all be mistaken since I just finished reading it and could be missing something... Sorry for the confusing fragmented sentence! Off to read your other works :)
xclarissamariex 2008-07-15 ch 14,	I love this story.=]
Muffins 2008-07-14 ch 40,	I loved the whole story you did great. It was amazing. I think that you should make a sequel. Cause that would be amazing.
muffins 2008-07-14 ch 37,	will's announcement was so adorable great job.
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 34,	What the hell he can't be parilized I mean, that means that he can't dance and not dancing is bad. like really bad.
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 32,	like i said before will better live
lyndea kelleher 2008-07-13 ch 38,	wow, i liked the story, it was really cute. But i honestly did not like the character of jessica. She was always putting herself down and really she just acted so dumb to me sometimes. But i was falling in love with Will, he just seems perfect. Haha, good story !
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 31,	WHAT just happened. That is not alowd. I swear if you kill jess or will i will have to kill you.
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 30,	I can't wait to see Will squirm about finding out about how Jess feels about him.
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 29,	That awful evil bastard of a scum of a human being that is Andrew I can't belive that he would do something so horrible. Gr
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 23,	So i don't feel sorry for preverted bastard Mr Cunningham anymore. But poor Jess. God I would hate getting almost raped.
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-13 ch 21,	Yeah Emo's do exist, and I like how you didn't make them out to be horrible people cause I'm friends with a few of them at my school.

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