I thought this was going to be anothe rreligious uptake, but this was much much more than I expected. Sad... that Adam... you know. Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet vaugely. The I-thought-you-were-dead-so-I-killed-myself thing. Adam didn't have to die! *crys*

This is very well done. Quite a page turner. Its sad in that way that I'm sure you wanted it to be. I also want to thank for your review of my stories, and encourage you to keep up the good work.

I like it a lot.

i loved this story it was very well written. please continue it.

great start.