 my-vision 2004-06-09 . chapter 1i know how you feel... life can become monotonous and dull sometimes, like we've actually gotten used to the fact that somehow the earth composed by some unknown force amazingly hangs together in perfection and we are only part of it. it's hard to believe.
anyway, very good poem. you stress your feelings amazingly well! "All that's left to search within/Is ordinary stars." wow. good job! |