Aw. ^^ that was good!

Wow, that was odd. When I told you the button disappeared, the fic stopped when Luci said "But... you were so..." he stopped, his blush deepening. "...So happy." he finished softly. oO;; It didn't even give me the full fic! That's so odd.
>=( That master better not hurt Luci or Angel. *Cracks knuckles* But then again, I don't like "Cinderella" endings. ;p.

Hm...and who is the corpse I wonder, eh? Erm...it was good...Kinda short for you but hey- That's probably the length of my longest chap eh? *wink* Eh- it was good and yup.
Chow

Nice, I really liked your description of Hell in the beginning. Very explanitory.

As promised, I read on... Glad I did, I've been given a glimpse into your Hell. I'm curious to know who The Lady is, and I'm guessing that the "corpse" is Lucifer... I'm not too sure about that though.
What praise would you like me to give you? "It was very well written." Too cliche, everyone says it, including myself. "I can't wait to read more!" Another reoccuring phrase. Iv'e found that there are no words to describe the way I feel about your writing, but I hope you can put them there for me.

Well, Iv'e been waiting for the Angel/Lucifer story for a long time, now I have it in my grasp.
The Devil, a half-goat man with a pitch fork and horns? No, of course not. Only myths describe what people think he is, for that is their fear. But, then again, that is my theory. If you die, and even if you haven't sinned, you could be sent to Hell. But Hell isin't a fiery pit, or men with whips, it's a person's own nightmare. We create Hell, we will suffer for it.
So I thought to myself as I was reading this, What is my own vision of Hell? I smirked... And said to myself, I'm living it.
This fic has captured my attention, and I will continue to read it. Till the next chapter!

Hm...Cool...um...no, no fire? Um...okay. Does Luci die?
Chow,
D.Moon