I love your story. Its unconventional and dark. Its much more fun to explore the psyche of villains than heroes.

Hi! As I promissed I read your fic! (actually, only half ^^; too busy). Looks really nice, specially because it's in 1st person narrator, I like this kind of story, you can feel more about the character's feelings.

I can't make this a long review, because I'm typing with one hand...
It's strange, but everytime you make a fic with an absolute pairing that's going to be there throughout the whole fic, I don't like it. Don't get me wrong, I think Zare and Blaze look good together, just not perfect... *shrugs* It's probably just me.
Anyways, update soon.

Fire...*drool* col...I love fires...I dislike cannibilism but I LOVE fires! ^.^- why won't he make more fires? Some arsonist. If I were him- I'd NEVER quit- just to be annoying. Well it's good.
Chow,
D.Moon

You have a great plot and story and all, but the fragmented sentences in the beginning were a little wierd and made the story a little choppy. I know that you're using them as a literary device (wel I think) but try not to cut the sentences up into so many pieces. 1 or 2 fragments from one sentence wuld get your point across and sound great too. And you really characterized Blaze well.