ur poems are so long! wow

I know you love this woman, but to call her lover a leper and to accuse him of things like lust is uncalled for. She must have seen something in him for her to have chosen him. It's true that free verse is a form of poetry, but good free verse has a rhythm to it.
Just because you love her, doesn't mean everyone else who loves her is a monstrosity. What sets us and the world apart is that we should love our enemies, not hate.

Yeap...its a bit long. but well written. I think you have a good vocabulary and also the arrangement of words, expressing what you feel. Good job. Don't always feel so depressed aite. We all have our own problems :) Smile...take care.
- ^S|Kep|^ -
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I'm not a perfect person,
I never meant to do those things to you
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omg hunni stop with this sad stuff. i cudnt read all of it. but i want yu to noe that i love yu as a friend and i want yu to be happy. just wait it out and she might break up with him and then yu can tell her how yu feel k hun? but dun kill yaself cuz its not worth it.

This is so beautiful. You have such a way with words. It makes me want to be a great poet. Your poems are just entrancing. Sorry I'm rambling