Oo, I really like it. It's like touch and go imagery -a smattering here and there, -because of the stanzas- and it is an interesting format.Even though it's called "inheritance" at the beginning I was thinking of a girl talking to her boyfreind or something, until I got to the "daughter". I like the underlying idea btw

God, this was so beautiful and nostalgiac. I love the mood and the ambiance of this poem, like breathing in a fresh whiff of air! No complaints, here! -adds this to her Favorite stories list, too.-

This is beautiful. I love the format as well, it's kind of disjointed, but it flows.And I especially enjoy the last two lines.
Thank you for this.

Gorgeous.
It conveys a lot for something that you have to do a double-take on to really get.
Gabby

Love this one, as you know. Makes me wish I had a background like that.