Au! Thank you! This one was beautiful, and crisp. Imagery, language, simplicity, message, form: exceptional. Everything was there and it gave me a good feeling. It made me a little chilly, actually. This goes in my Favorite Stories' list.

would it change me? maybe if a flower rose out of the shattered glass. then again, a question like this doesn't have an answer.
the poem itself - powerful words, yet so fragile. an experience, not just a poem. kudos.

I love this one so much. Poems use to be so much more for me. I wish they were still.