Love it.
Wow. I'm speechless (I'm astonished and amaized...) ^__^
I love the part 'I'm broked and healed'
"I am the second man now, and you're raising the in me." thought you'd like that.
See ya.
>__

yey you see angels... sorry my mind's a bit odd today. great job though

I liked the repetitiveness. It almost makes it seem like she is the angel that you see. You think and dream of her, but she is gone, an angel that you think of. There is a great imagry there. Great feeling. Nicely unstructured.

I am so sorry that this happened. I loved how you added the angels in there...beautifully written.
Sillygoose
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Aww so sweet but so sad. The reason you were inspired is sad as well, tragic. Aww..