how did they meet...is that the ending...update soon..

This is an interesting story. I liked the "he" and "she", it makes it mysterious. I would offer constructive criticism, but I see nothing to criticize! Anyways, continue writing, you have caught my eye!

Hmm, I thought it was going to be H/Hr though? But I guess since you have gone with the pro-noun route it can be some random people as well. Anyway you already know what I think of it. Wonderful.