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| Forest Passant 2004-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseI like... sounds like a song. Maybe NOFX. yeah. Or uh... what's their name... uggh. have you ever had that when a band is on the... Pennywise. That's it. Sounds like a Pennywise song. Glad I got that. It was gonna bug me for... Sorry, got off topic. I liked it. |
| Delete Name 2004-07-07 ch 1, | abuseSo you don't like war because people die, but you support abortion. . Hmm... . Anyways, your poem has no rhyme though it's repetiveness is refreshing. I have a feeling it's supposed to be a song, at least all those "Yeah's" suggest it. . 8/10 |
| Princess of Darkness 72 2004-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great poem...I totally agree with what your saying. Keep on writing and expressing yourself so beautifully. I enjoyed reading this poem |
| Story-Teller's Aide 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseBRILLIANT! (by the way, may i add in regards to the last review that you are kind of putting down any two-year-olds by comparing them to George Bush. at least a two-year-old doesn't intentionally go to war with the purpose of getting cheap oil, proving their power and ruining hundreds of thousands of lives. and two-year-olds are slightly more articulate than Bush, don't you think?) |
| myheartbelongstosuperman 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abuse*applaudes* Excellent! I agree whole-heartedly! He doesn't consider the consequences of this actions at all.. like a two-year-old... |