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Sin 2004-06-23 . chapter 1
E! Luff it! -cling- Ok... too lazy to sign in. But its me. Err... I. When you say "There is one death to many", shouldnt it be 'too', not 'to'? Ok. I'm annoying. But its soo good. My brain is off. Will give concrit lata, k?
My Psychosis 2004-06-10 . chapter 1
Oh, I like this one the most. It's very deep.
"Marble veined hands try to touch the sun" Such beautiful words. And it's ok if you kinda cheated with the poem promter thingy, we all have to do that from time to time...godd work and well done.
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