And this leads me back to where I began! This is better than the first one in most aspects, really nice. Well, have fun writing!

Are you going to post "The Hydra of DR. Lerna" by the way?

Whoah, Tyrantis can chirp? That's new.

Hey! First of all, I'm a GIRL not a guy! And second of all, I enjoyed your review... Tee hee... C'mon, first person narratives are great! Particularly if you are writing something that is about a character's internal struggles...

Oh yes, I wonder how you plan on changing the story line here, it's so cute! It really reminds of that old Godzilla cartoon I used to watch! So JC is afraid of crocodiles and Lerna chose a croc for that particular reason? And those child prodigies thing... So funny!

How old are you now anyway? You seem a little "frustrated" with your "craptacular versions" Tee hee... I had the same problem, don't worry... I was laughing my head off on this Teddy Bear story I wrote when I was eight!