Aw... This was one of the very first stories I had reviewed! That was last year, and I had almost forgotten how funny I had found this story!

Hope you still have a review alert or something! E-mail me if you get this and if you will ever write more ^_^

TitanGhidorah says Hello.
I have no clue what Armadon has to say, though.
Ah well. Good story.

Well, it's not done yet. Plus it gets kind of gory later on... as for introducing the characters, well, their introduced in this story's prequels. Oh, and for some reason the html versions of my stories(the only versions fictionpress.com will let me use) son't indent. Please continue to read it. Oh, and I do make ilustrations of the monsters and fights.

This story seems more like a newspaper comic strip than anything. Do you sketch? The tale would be more interesting if some good illustrations were added. Of course, I have no idea if you could post drawings on this site in the first place.
I found it very entertaining, and it was a good idea cutting the story into short chapters. If you don't mind me saying, I found it funny rather than gruesome and horrific.
However, I think you should give more emphasis on introducing the characters, because I'm a little confused on who J.C. is supposed to be. Also, do not forget to always add identations to your paragraphs.