really like this, i love all the mentions of water and liquid and stuff... kinda helps your poem flow (if you pardon the pun) as it is used all the way through the poem, good work x weasel within x

You have a gift.
Keep writing.

...*sits sumbfounded* The images in this are simply stunning. I am completely blown away.

really like how the first two lines flow together...wonderfully done here!

you know as much as i try to advoid reviewing your work, it only lasts for *looks at the date posted* 6 days... wow, thats it? anyways, nice poem, short and cute.

well done. i love the way you chose to describe things, unique and passionate. this is a great piece. keep writing!

I love the imagery of the "blue blossoming rose." The shorter poems work just as wonderful for you as your longer, nice work.

that's lovely. well done:)

*sniffs* SUch saddness and emotion and imagery. Reminds me so much of the poems I write about lost love. Wonderful as always Matthew. *hugs*
Hawke