I like it.. very creepy and powerful word choice

Ooh powerful writing. I thought it was written in a complicated manner yet the story under it is simple and I think somewhere I understood it. I don't like to try and explain incase I'm wrong but gave me the idea of medieval times with demons and such, combined with modern day because we all have inner demons to battle don't we? Great writing D

It's really good
it says to me that the demon usually kills everyone in the end even the hero that has killed so much demons in the past but this time he lost.
Excellent work Fabian.
F.O.X

I was going to review all of the poems in order, but I saw the word "demon" in the summary of this one and simply had to click out of turn... _ And it seems I have been rewarded with a lovely poem full of amazing imagery. Keep up the great work!
The One and Only

wow that was very nice and interesting

"My spirit's complacey lasso's my flowing scale." Such great imagery! A death of something, perhaps a physical death. I like this it can be interpreted in so many ways.