 Kali Akotor 2004-12-29 . chapter 43Now this is what I have come to expect from you Caprice ^^. There is pain and sadness in teh words, yet a grain of hope still remains. I look forward to reading the next epolouge or however that word is speled. I hope that it is filled with as much or more pain, but with still the grim sliver of hope. |
 Kali Akotor 2004-12-22 . chapter 42* nods* It is a good one... but its much too happy if you know what i mean... No one after faicing the peril that they did could ever live that happily. . . That is just my oppinion...> |
 Kali Akotor 2004-12-09 . chapter 41... he's gone. Caprice, why? No, you will explain, you are known for you great eplainations. *sighs and sits, waiting for the explaination* I will wait for the explaination before I put forth my veiws on this chapter, that I can promise you and I will. |
 alexei04 2004-12-03 . chapter 41good chapter. I will miss Mira though. So what is going to happen to Sorlo? Update soon! |
 Kali Akotor 2004-11-23 . chapter 40T-T.. Noo... you cant kill yourself!! I dont want to be all alone in this crewl world without your story!! Im sorry that I havent reveiwed, School work is becoming bothersome.
I am not really sure what to say about this chapter. It is good, that I do know, but what is it, I cannot tell where it is going. I hope that you will continue and not leave me alone in the dark. Thanks. and many many sorrys.. |
 alexei04 2004-11-15 . chapter 40Good chapter. I swear that I reviewed. I promise...but stupid fp...grr.
Interesting turn of events! Keep up the good work! |
 alexei04 2004-11-08 . chapter 39WHAT? Poor Sorlo...wow...this is interesting...update soon so I am not confused anymore! |
 Kali Akotor 2004-11-08 . chapter 39... hmm... what an interesting twist... I like it ...
Though I am kinda mad that you let that jerk Izerik take away Sorlo's soul... >..< Mucho sorrys... |
 Kali Akotor 2004-10-28 . chapter 37Ah... Anytime for a great author...
Well, this is certainly not what I expected from the story. It was a real twist, but totaly comprihendable. Sorlo and Korem, if given to your description at the begining of the story, look similar in my head, heh heh heh... I would draw them for you but I have been haveing a bit of a computer problem at the moment so I wouldnt be able to scan it onto the computer and then submit it. Enough of my problems, Back to the story...
Are you really going to end it compleetly?? Though it is a bit long in the chapters, it is a great place to work your mind in the many subtle disctiptions!!... ^^... and I would be honnored if you reveiwed any of my poems and storys!! |
 alexei04 2004-10-28 . chapter 37wow. That was interesting. Phez is a God.
Oh yeah...I tried to see your chapeter last night..but fictionpress wouldn't let me.
Good chapter! |
 alexei04 2004-10-22 . chapter 36poor acuzzy. i am sad the story is almost over. *tear* its good. I cannot wait for the next chapter! Post more soon! |
 alexei04 2004-10-20 . chapter 35YAY! I am finally able to review this chapter! Good job. Definitely interesting, but good. I cannot wait until you update! |
 Kali Akotor 2004-10-11 . chapter 35phez.. the insane one... and very mysterious... like it alot.. though I didnt understand half of the chapters and it is worth it... keep it up, I will read them, I AM YOUR FAITHFUL FANN! * hands her a fan, * er... yeah.. congrats you won it... eh... I really didnt understand it at all but that is what happens when you dont want to re read the previous one... * nods* keep up the awsome work!! |
 Kali Akotor 2004-10-04 . chapter 34er... what was the comment about again... er... eh heh heh heh ... nevermind...
The twins... something about them isnt right. After looking back at the previouse chapters, Broze doesnt seem like a bad person after all, ( though he did pawn off Kaides earrings... cheep marron)) But the twins... no one can be cheerfull all the time, and what was with the boys sudden energy drop. something about them isnt right, that I do know... well I cant wait till you update again... and I promise that I will reveiw every chapter * nods* untill the end!! |
 Kali Akotor 2004-09-30 . chapter 33I am soo sory for not reveiwing your story in a long time... I er.. kinda got too busy... BUT I LOVE IT! T_T... (( and I am still greatful for the Sorlo plushi))
To sum up the...erm... last 17 chapters taht I have sped read and reread because I love them soo much, it is a twisted plot, Sorlo is becoming distant and seeminly able to control the entire thing with a rare and careful world. It seems that Phez is part of the God realm er... Deiti ( er... the word that sounds like Dai-i-tea, I cant spell it at the moment.) There seems to be more to Eyzlen then meets the eye. I had to go back a few ( more like ten) chapters and re read one of Sorlos dreams. This is a great little story, and I am very very sorry that I havent reveiwed as much as I would have liked to. Also, I would like to appologise for my own lack of updates, I havent beenin the mood to type it all up there but I swear, on my own laptop, that I will have it up, er.. the most recent chapter at least, Up befor the end of Christmas Vacation or by the end of the new year!! And I wil have the rest of that story compleeted! * nods* I am so soo sory that, me being one of your many many loyal fans, Havent been reveiwing...TT_TT * gets on her knees and begs* I begg for your forgivenecc Caprice... I truly am sorry! |