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| Kalyra Shadowdancer 2004-09-02 ch 14,   | AMAZING STORY! i LOVED it! sorry it took me so long to catch up on reading the chaps, but being away for two months put me behind in reading/reviewing. Anyways, you should definitely write more like this: i would say write a sequel, but i dont think you could get a better ending to a story than this, so i'll just go with something similar. I realli liked the whole airport scene! i could SOO see it happening just from reading it!! You really made Amy's character come to life - she was so realistic in how she intereacted and related to people and situations that it was very fun to read her (and Mitch's) story. Keep writing! You rock! ~KS |
| Seere Shadowstar 2004-08-01 ch 14, | it's really good! it really raps it all up. good work! |
| sweet hunny 2004-07-27 ch 1, | awesome story. keep up the awesome work! |
| Seere Shadowstar 2004-07-27 ch 12, | it's GREAT! wonderful ending! four stars! it's realy realy good. you can totaly connect with them. are you going to do a sequle? |
| Aphrodides 2004-07-27 ch 12, | Oh yeah! This story was awesome, I wish it could go on! Are we gonna be writing anymore stories? |
| Aphrodides 2004-07-22 ch 9, | Good chapter woman! Maybe Mitchell will get her sister a part?! Update! |
| oneredneckgoddess 2004-07-17 ch 10, | Wonderful! I was upset to reach the end! You have a good plot line but there are a few holes in the current story. There were some parts where the narrator moved from a place or got up from a place that she wasn't in before. It interrupts the flow of the story line. Other than that your writing is amazing and you have a way of captivating your audience. |
| christianchick2 2004-07-02 ch 8, | Hey Aroranightsky! its me christianchick2*kelly* i just read the chptr 8. It is getting better..i am still working on my first story so yea. Great job ! ~christianchick2~ |
| I-eat-Paste 2004-07-01 ch 8, | YAYAY a fast update!! Good chapter a little short but good none the less! Can't wait till you update!! |
| Aphrodides 2004-06-28 ch 7, | Good story. Keep updating! |
| I-eat-Paste 2004-06-27 ch 6, | I love this story! IT's awesome and you're a great writer! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
| Kalyra Shadowdancer 2004-06-19 ch 5, | heya! just wwanted to drop ya a note. i luv this story so far! the dialogue is great! not boring and very snappy! keep writing, i wanna see wut happens next! n' thanks for reviewing my stuff too. later, ~KS |
| Ayashi-san 2004-06-16 ch 4, | *Smiles*...personally i'm not really a fan of first person point of view. It makes me feel like -I'm- doing the stuff and i want to feel like the characters are doing the stuff. But you can really get into a characters mood this way and i think you've done a good job with it, not to mention it's a good way to expand ones writting ability. - One spelling error escuse should be excuse. I'd like to read the rest of this story! Please update soon! |
| summergirl63088 2004-06-16 ch 4, | Yay! She finally meets Mitchell! Please continue! |
| summergirl63088 2004-06-11 ch 3, | Great story! Please continue soon! |