Another amazing one. I love the hidden messages that you can't see until the end in your poems!

i didnt quite get the last line, but i did like it. i like how it kinda told a story. it was good.

oh . . . slayer, that was creepy.
I know that it's a subject to be prodded, but it's like poking an open wound.
It's so sad.
and certain environments breed so many of these lives.
a life with no sunshine . . .
but to prefer death?

Ah, I knew this would happen, the dark side of A. finally reveals her/himself. Now that I'm a safe distance away, I can really say that you're a little bit of both (guy and that is). ^__^
Nice poem! You convey...convy...get! You get the message across very well!
Anyway, I've been waiting to say this, so here it is:
"Quoth the reader, write some more!"
Love you! (but not in that way!)
LG >__

wonderful poem. you conveyed the emotions and your message well. great job. i like this a lot.