|Reviews for Unrest|
| Ultimate Schuyler 12/15/04 . chapter 1
...Wow, that's so cool! I have absolutely no clue what you're talking about. I thought of the Matrix when I read this, ha ha ha. Anyway, thank you so much for reminding me that I put my haiku in the wrong section. Doumo arigatou gozaimasu!
| Endless Nightmares 8/6/04 . chapter 1
Hello- Very good haiku here. Its a nice one.
| Debbirooni 7/9/04 . chapter 1
Hrmm... title confused me from your poem... and not sure if I knew quite what you were talkin about... title is throwin me off.. But yeah, very nice imagery in this haiku. The wording was perfect; extensive vocabulary such as lethargy, and cleaving, and even more impressive was how you used these words. I just loved the "phrase" structure, and they are just so captivating.
Great job and keep on writin'!
| Merit Somnia 6/17/04 . chapter 1
I thought that the first line was the very best. Clouds of confusion, it reminded me of. Through it isn't the same. Oh well.
| Dracula Lord of the Vampires 6/11/04 . chapter 1
It's okay, but in my opinion, it doesn't stick to the title.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 6/11/04 . chapter 1
yes yes nice nice again
| SeaVoi 6/11/04 . chapter 1
This one is a bit calm for my tastes, but none the less still makes a nice picture. :)
| Sterces 6/10/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful haiku! TALENT-O-METER: 9 WOW OFF DA CHARTS! ) Really though... Beautiful! It's nice to see a well-written tanka... One that really speaks to me...