Chris...I didn't know what to think of this. The last line is great though. It made me laugh in a few places. You come up with rhymes that no one in their right mind would come up with. Then again...you aren't exactly in your right mind, are you? None of us are...You don't write for the Breeze and...never mind. It was funny. I laughed. By no stretch of the imagination was this the best poem I've ever read, but I did enjoy it. Good work, Chris.

Okay, I really don't like it when people describe my stuff as cute, so I'm sorry if I'm offending you by saying this...but this is a cute poem. I like it. The part about your pants reeked made me laugh and the end made me go "aw" but maybe that's just because I'm a girl. I dunno. I it is a good poem. I'm gonna go read some more you your stuff now...
>>Twizz

This is great. I especially love the last line. Great job.

Lol. Depressing until the last line, where it suddenly metamorphosed into a very amusing poem. Love the transition.