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| Levine 2008-10-07 ch 5,  | I really wish you'd update this story. I found it a while back, and figured you wouldn't be updating soon. And recently I found it again and re-read it, still love it. DAMN YOU FOR THE CLIFFHANGER. It's okay, I forgive you. =D I really do love your writing style, and I suggest you email me if you do update. I'd love to read more, if you write more. |
| say this sooner 2007-08-31 ch 5,  | this is amazing. update? :] |
| Foxy501 2007-06-10 ch 5, | please update! very interesting! |
| Back of Beyond 2007-01-20 ch 5, | brilliant story, i enjoyed reading it so far! shame you haven't updated though :( |
| lilylupin7 2006-09-23 ch 5, | Sweet chapter :) |
| AoiHebi 2006-08-04 ch 5, | Waugh! There's no more!?! Damn, and I was really liking this one! But, uh, I guess I shouldn't get my hopes up too high, huh? I mean, this hasn't been updated since, what, November of 2004? Sheww, that sucks! Oh well, I enjoyed what was there. You have a good style, and you describe depression very well. (been there) I also really like Kale. He's very . . . mysterious. Yes, that's the right word. I'd love to know more about him. (hint hint) Thanks for the interesting read! And I'll keep an eye on this one, just for ** and giggles since I know it's probably been abandoned. |
| Forgotten Raven Goddess 2006-06-28 ch 5, | *whines undignantly* I know it's been a long while but update please? I love this story so far, I can kind of relate to it even though I have never been in a crazy house. |
| paledaisy78 2006-06-08 ch 1, | OMG! I am SO HAPPY you started writing this again, i love this story and i was so sad when you stopped writing it for the long while...BUT NOW YOU STARTED AGAIN! *squee*! Keiji sounds like a very interesting sort of character...they all do actually. great beginning! |
| Marie 2006-05-30 ch 5, | I hope you'll be able to continue this story. The institutuon the boys are in is nothing short of sadistic. And Keiji, how can member of staff (man **) f* a patient? Please update if you can. |
| tia-blue 2006-04-09 ch 5, | OMG! you HAVE to keep writting! this is even better then Collin and Gavin, which is really saying something! yay! |
| theremaybeagod@yahoo.com 2006-03-05 ch 5, | ah. wow. gahh. i've just found this after reading or recently updated story and this is just as amazing. why hasn't it been updated in over a year? that last line made me die. i honestly melted. geez... |
| Jayn 2006-01-31 ch 5, | Aw, poor Alex! And lots of the people there.PLEASE update!! |
| Deadly Beautiful 2005-09-27 ch 5, | LOVE it! ...and it looks as though you're not updating it any time soon. |
| Cherise 2005-09-09 ch 5, | NO! Cliffie! Right after the friggin confession, too?! No! |
| pneumothorax 2005-08-29 ch 5, | I do like the ending to this chapter. Love how they're growing closer. 'Kale gave a half laugh, half sigh. “Because..it’d mean I had a chance..”' The half laugh/sigh image is wonderful here. In parts it seems slightly unrealistic with the idea of roamnce in mental wards being pretty unbelievable, but it works OK. |