This is my favorite one.

"The soft glow of the television

is your lullaby

And its sad what sings you to sleep

And the radiance of the yardlight

is your nightlight

And its sad what comforts you to sleep"

I love this opening. It makes me feel. This whole thing makes me feel.

I truly love it.

Ah, why haven't I been reviewing? *overcome with guilt* Well, I moved to a different house, so things have been hectic. That's my excuse. Anyway...I loved the pattern of this, the way the verses are. And I just love the honesty in the line "Oh God there's Days" So lovely.

nice one... cuts a dash from the boring sappy love poem/songs around. im no poet or whatever, but i honestly think this is quite good. -grin-

Hey. God Stuf. Sorry about the extended word(s). Its late and I cant think but I can tell this is good.