Reviews for The Thawing of the Ice Bitch

Reviews For: The Thawing of the Ice Bitch - Reviews: Page 1 of 15

Katharine DuRose 2008-11-29 ch 28,	I miss this story.
qtkemi 2008-08-17 ch 28,	Saying I like this story would be understatement of the century...This story is seriously that good...and by the number of reviews you recieve, im sure everyone agrees with me...At the beginning of this story, I would have never thought it would turn out this well, but you've exceeded my expectations once again. Bravo. BIG FAN! -kemi
Crazy.Until.Proven.Otherwis... 2008-07-31 ch 28,	So I've reached chapter twenty-eight of a very engrossing story only to find... nothing. Well. That did put a slight damper on my otherwise damper-less spirits, you see, because apart from this sudden stoppage of brilliant writing, it was a fairly good story. Who am I kidding? It's an excellent story; the plot line flows, the characters are exciting and have a wide range of vocabulary, and Em is just... If there were more Em's out there, the world would be a better, smarter (and slightly more cynical) place. I actually meant to review... well, I meant to review about twenty chapters ago, but I just kept clicking that next button instead of the 'go' button. Itchy mouse finger is what I'm blaming it on, but it also might have something to do with the fact that I'mm hooked on this story. There are a couple of things I'd like to point out though, and one of them is that sometimes you mix up characters, and also possessive nouns like "he" and "she". I've only noticed it a few times, and maybe the rest are just me being stupid and not realising that you are actually talking about the right character. The other thing I'd like to say is that you had a "stalker" going after Mona, as well as someone who was watching Em, and he suddenly disappeared somewhere in the last eight or so chapters. Is he still out there, or would that spoil the plot? Your sentences are wonderfully worded, your vocabulary wide and ranged, and I do remember that at one point you asked if your sentences were too long. My answer is that your style of writing makes the long sentences work, and the way you use words should be an Olympic event. I'm in awe of your word wielding skills, and it's not often that I'm in awe. I've just checked your last update, and you haven't produced anything new in over a year. This review mightn't even get to you, because you may have renounced the art of writing altogether, but if you do see it, I just want to tell you that I hope you find your muse, inspiration, whatever it is that keeps you going, because this is an excellently written story that has kept me reading for days. I even pointedly ignored my homework to read it. Which felt really quite rebellious and pointed out to me exactly how sad my life is. Oh well! I hope you still find writing enjoyable, because I'd like to read the rest of this story. Cookies and other sugar-high inducing goodies (are you inclined to be swayed by bribery?) Alana
cbprice25 2008-06-09 ch 28,	My dear, you are going to have to update. This Prom has lasted long enough and I believe we are all (very) eager to find out what comes next. Bonne chance (& good luck)!
neutron 2008-05-18 ch 28,	try updating..
naru 2008-01-08 ch 1,	HII! Are you ever going to update? lol me? rude? naah... I love your story, it's hilarious and Em is one of the best charcters ever created. I can't wait for more( but i probably will anyway). :P I'm not trying to be pushy, im just letting you know that people out there still love your story!!
January Skies 2007-12-31 ch 28,	I do hope you continue soon! This is such an interesting story. And its not to clich, because usually the main character is in total denial, and people aren't having their own love problems. Em seems really interestin and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Abbigail 2007-12-06 ch 28,	I'm thinking you're not coming back ... And I had a feeling that there was going to be some revelations and closure soon. Hope you're doing well in life and if you're lurking around!! Update soon. or at least tell us whats up?
Essie 2007-09-10 ch 1,	Life happens I guess ... But right at a cliffhanger? It's like chinese water torture. Or Canadian water torture - more modern methods you know. Right, I'm rambling so pip pip cheerio before I say anything more stupid.
brittle hearts 2007-06-13 ch 28,	I think I can safely proclaim your story as one of the very best I've ever read. Your writing is near to flawless, and I love how it's so intricate. The dialogue and banter between your characters are always delightful, and I often find myself smiling or laughing aloud when I read them. Especially Phillip. XD I read all 28 chapters at one go, and my interest didn't dip once. The beginning was a little slow-paced, but it set the mood of the story. It's nice to see how Em developed over the chapters, from a relatively unfeeling person to a girl with a group of ** friends. Of course, adding Dante to the mix made the storyline pick up quite a bit. :) Anyhow, I love your story to bits and I sincerely cannot wait for your next update.
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic 2007-06-05 ch 28,	love it, take your time but please do finish it :)
sam reddy 2007-05-08 ch 28,	Please go on with this story. this is the one of my best stories to follow around, and if you finish it, id be really happy. This is the only story which reminds me fiction press is not so bad after all... please continue.
mailai 2007-05-02 ch 28,	Ok, so I read the chapter a while ago now, well, the same day you posted it. and thank you so much by the way, i'd had a 3 hour history exam before and it was just what i needed when i got home. And yes! A little bit of Dante at the end, not enough but i liked the suspense of not being sure whether he really would turn up, and he didn't go to her concert? well that's just a real shame. Woohoo! bring on the fluffiness... fluffyness... flu- not going into spelling. well, actually saying that i reread the last bit of the chapter and 9 lines up from the bottom it says "smile on her face that unnerved her", i'm guessing it should be "smile on HIS face that unnerved her"... i'm a grammar queen. so sue me :D I hope the next update is soon. And i'm keeping my fingers crossed there's going to be some em/dante dancing! could be funny, all depends on how you write it. Update soon!
lil devil 2007-04-28 ch 28,	YAY! finally an update! i fort u were gonna just leave it unfinished or sumthing>.
pinkfluffyoranges 2007-04-23 ch 28,	holy moses. I do believe this is the ebst story i have ever read on fiction press! It's now extremelly late or early, my piont being that this will be a terrible review. I sincerely hope to see another chapter soon, it breaks my heart that its not finnished. Its been up since 2004? that's a long time to have a story not finnihsed. Your characters and plot is so unbeliably flawless and it shows that you have this story planned to a tee. Seriously I think i'll go insane not knowing the conclusion to this story and to be left with such a cliff hanger. Your an amazingly talented writer, please for the sake of a poor plebians soul update and finnish this story!

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