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| Jow 2004-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! Eyuu! TOUKA! XD Nee I luffs your stories. Thank you very much for writing them and letting me read them *hug* This one made my heartstop for a moment like right... Here: And then the cold hit him. It slammed into his body and he was alone, numb, the only feeling he had was that of the cold. He didn’t feel the strong, bruising grip this mysterious stranger had, or the fierce kiss. There was nothing but cold, and it was painful, piercing and gripped his soul, and it seemed as if it would shatter him, inside and pierce through his chest, ending his life in a painful manner. That! That is the part that hit me like a sledgehammer! Thank you Nee-chan! |
| Des-chan 2004-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY well-written~! ^_^ But the end was sad. ;-; Nyaw. Still. That was a lot of character put into a short-like story- takes a lot of talent to pull that off. ^_^ I ish impressed with you Nee-chan. o.o I /LOVE/ your work~! * |