 DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 . chapter 1"A color is drained from my skin"--I'm wondering if you meant 'As' and not 'A' at the start? Aside from that, it's a really good poem. Graphic as hell, but still well-written. |
 tancred 2004-07-06 . chapter 1 Vivid and somewhat gross poem. Glad I wasn't eating at the time. ;) I had an accident in art class once, and slit my wrist while trying to cut stained glass, so it all sounds familiar. A feeling of dread and hopelessness throughout. |
 Nienyalie 2004-06-11 . chapter 1Ah, refreshing morbidity, awesome, truly awesome. |
 MistrissD 2004-06-11 . chapter 1Love the imagrey, very morbid, but very very beautiful, much loves to this |
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