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Reviews For: My Sickness
DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 . chapter 1
"A color is drained from my skin"--I'm wondering if you meant 'As' and not 'A' at the start? Aside from that, it's a really good poem. Graphic as hell, but still well-written.
tancred 2004-07-06 . chapter 1
Vivid and somewhat gross poem. Glad I wasn't eating at the time. ;) I had an accident in art class once, and slit my wrist while trying to cut stained glass, so it all sounds familiar. A feeling of dread and hopelessness throughout.
Nienyalie 2004-06-11 . chapter 1
Ah, refreshing morbidity, awesome, truly awesome.
MistrissD 2004-06-11 . chapter 1
Love the imagrey, very morbid, but very very beautiful, much loves to this
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