Oh! I love the first line. Can't say why exactly, but I love it.

"This broken, desecrated, and desolated soul"--Good use of adjectives here!

Whoa. This turned out to be much...deeper...than I thought it would be. I'm not saying I thought it was fluff or anything, but jeez that's deep now that I've read the ending.

Great series of poems!

Beautiful, that even in such a despairing situation, there can be hope.

I like this one a little better, it was good. ~*Keep writing*~