I liked the beginning lines of the first few stanzas (Death, cold death...etc). They really drew me into it a lot more than I would have been otherwise. And the end was good, too.

And, yes, it is funny that you put it in the 'Life' section. Lol.

i like the ending. it shows a future strong comeback. good times! keep writing, you're really good!

This one is one of my favorite, but its a little cliched, so work on that. ~*Keep writing*~