| Reviews for Moondrops |
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Fuinixe 3/27/05 . chapter 1*sigh* Wow. I just had to read this one. The title was too intriguing not to. I worship your imagery. Hmm, something I'd change? "Where's his angel now?" sounds bulky. I dunno what you'd replace it with, though. Oh, and the first word is silver, but when you say "midas touch" later it makes me think of gold, and breaks up the overall feel. Still, beautiful. |
katmonkey 3/26/05 . chapter 1Cool poem. I like the imagery. *lime-girl* |
incandescent.smiles 1/29/05 . chapter 1that was very pretty in a very twisted way (and don't worry, that was a compliment! :D) i really like it, if everything is this good, you just might be going on my faves! leila* |
Nothing Profound 1/6/05 . chapter 1The imagery portrayed here is absolutely amazing. |
Keith Andrew 12/15/04 . chapter 1Great, very interesting idea. And very well told as well. Like gentle raindrops falling from the sky upon the lonesome traveller. Very interesting and unique, i like it-keith Andrew |
ROMAN EMPEROR 7/23/04 . chapter 1Iam a person who loves the moon. so this poem really caught my attention. The imagry...im speeachless , u have cought my description, the words, the stanzas, perfection. es perfecto, muy bueno. |
caks 6/12/04 . chapter 1ooh that makes me think of dew like the cold lights... or maybe i am just very confused.. great imagery! awesome i love this kind of writing |
forgottenmoon831 6/12/04 . chapter 1Very cool poem! I like how you went from silver to black! I also love the title, "Moondrops", I just love the sound of it, it sounds...ethereal and mystical and beautiful, Sorry, maybe that's just me, anyways, great poem, and oh yeah, thanks for reviewing my poem! |
Nienyalie 6/11/04 . chapter 1*eyes wide open* *stammers*...That...that was so completely beautiful...you...talented...wow! |
strummychick 6/11/04 . chapter 1indeed.(with above) |
Julie Poe 6/11/04 . chapter 1Gorgeous imagery! It was beautiful! I can't even describe how I felt when reading this. You are truly gifted with words! |