I like this one alot! I couldn't quite catch on to the rhyme pattern, but that's ok! it got the message across.

ah ... a love poem ... and a beautiful one too, this one sincerely touched me ...

keltica, the celtic fire from within

Really nice piece. I loved that last stanza.

I like this one better. More ryhme, more taste. It's a bitter sweet thing about love.

This is really good. I like the whole loving an invisible thing. It is really cool. Keep your writing up!

Sad and deep, Though you may think its unoriginal, its executed originally

Another great poem. My favorite part was the last stanza:
"I turned to kiss you heart afire.
You weren't there
Another Phantom of my heart"
Excellent work! Keep on writing!