|Reviews for Haunted Heart|
| Karkiana 6/1/05 . chapter 1
I like this one alot! I couldn't quite catch on to the rhyme pattern, but that's ok! it got the message across.
| keltica 12/8/04 . chapter 1
ah ... a love poem ... and a beautiful one too, this one sincerely touched me ...
keltica, the celtic fire from within
| nesy 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Really nice piece. I loved that last stanza.
| CF and SB 6/24/04 . chapter 1
I like this one better. More ryhme, more taste. It's a bitter sweet thing about love.
| deepinthought 6/14/04 . chapter 1
This is really good. I like the whole loving an invisible thing. It is really cool. Keep your writing up!
| ROMAN EMPEROR 6/14/04 . chapter 1
Sad and deep, Though you may think its unoriginal, its executed originally
| Julie Poe 6/11/04 . chapter 1
Another great poem. My favorite part was the last stanza:
"I turned to kiss you heart afire.
You weren't there
Another Phantom of my heart"
Excellent work! Keep on writing!