This is so touching and beautiful.

That was really great. It's really well written, and very strong feelings. I wish someone would do that for me.
Love Lady Nel

beautifully open and fragile. i can relate. lovely.

Wow...very good!

O that is beautiful...the imagery is amazing...the frailty...truly beautiful

Different to your others! Very different but equally as strong. This one is so beautiful in the images and ideas. Really like this poem and please please keep writing!