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| Dysthymia 2007-04-30 ch 1,   | Love it! |
| Smoky Bear 2005-11-12 ch 1, | "They can stillgrasp space, as the darkagain becomes bright." - applauds |
| Blargh213213 2004-11-20 ch 1, | I love this poem. The wording is well placed and it flows very well. I do have a slight constructive idea, which actually has nothing to do with the poem. You may want to do something else with the summary, it kind of ruined the fun of the piece by giving it away before anyone has a chance to look at it. Just an idea, feel free to ignore. The poem is awesome! |
| Neo-Queen Terra of Crystal ... 2004-09-10 ch 1, | Very good. Very beautiful. I'll probably have half of my fav lists with your stuff by the time I finished reading your stories/poems. They're all so good. |
| Killer Instincts 2004-09-05 ch 1, | I like the apeal and imagery this gives. ^__^. Awesome as usual. |
| lunarghost 2004-08-17 ch 1, | its good |
| APersonAndAHalf 2004-07-12 ch 1, | "They can't love you in the dark, or turn on the light." Beautiful. ~A. Person |
| T'klesh 2004-06-15 ch 1, | You seem to be very talented with taking something simple, and finding depths in them! Its really amazing! You are definently a talanted writer |
| A Perfect Circle 2004-06-15 ch 1, | Good poem. Though to much rhyming with 'ight'. It flows nicely and nothing sounds forced. |
| ScarletWishingstar 2004-06-15 ch 1, | i have a small obsession with eyes...so i like this. luvly. *~*`//*~* |
| F.K. Abbott 2004-06-14 ch 1, | this one was excellent! I loved the way the poem flows. |
| lipstick stain 2004-06-11 ch 1, | wow...that's really pretty, beautiful. and true Congrats. Ciao |
| BERRY*LICIOUS 2004-06-11 ch 1, | wow, this is such a cool poem..its a really different way of looking at eyes. awesome :) |
| zeegurl29 2004-06-11 ch 1, | I like how it keeps a pattern. |