| Reviews for Broken Angel Wings |
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guardien 7/8/04 . chapter 1the wind is defenitely sucking the spirit out of me...this poem gets me thinking, nice one! |
Rionarayne 6/24/04 . chapter 1I like this one, and it reminds me a little of Evanescence songs. Nice work. Rionarayne |
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 6/17/04 . chapter 1that's awesome! I really like it! Ur name's Kayla? Me too! HOw about using your middle name... like mine would be Kayla Renee... or like I have a friend who's Kayla Ann it'd be neat... I dunno plz check out my stuff if you get the chance! I'd really appreciate it! thanks tiger-roses |
PinkDaydreams 6/14/04 . chapter 1hey, thanks for reviewing my poem :O) i like this poem a lot...its kind of an achingly beautiful poem: sad yet very pretty. id really like to hear it as a song! |
Cry Tears of Darkness 6/11/04 . chapter 1oh thats really nice as well! i like it tons! |
Sterces 6/11/04 . chapter 1*claps* ) Nice flow. I love your poetry. It's yummy! Sterces |
marshbar960 6/11/04 . chapter 1very melancholic yet i liked how everything flows, as well as the repitition used to help develop your overall mood. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
CW-nerd-12 6/11/04 . chapter 1Smile :) lighten up some (a lot). |
The Canines 6/11/04 . chapter 1Beautiful! I especially like "Why do halos burn? Is it such a punishment now? Such a sin of lover's feminity Angel's wings are broken and angel's tears have fallen Can't understand why Were all dying inside. "- Lykess "The Canines" (Please review our story?) |
BERRYLICIOUS 6/11/04 . chapter 1this is really pretty, i like it |
zeegurl29 6/11/04 . chapter 1That was really good. I like how it flows. |