Reviews for the attached pages

AntiPleasure 2004-06-15 ch 1,	Yeah I think the second line is a bit odd.. but hmm must be something else behind it. Jenna xx
godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-06-13 ch 1,	The second line is awkward, somehow. But I really like the concept/title for some reason. ~lyv
Franken 2004-06-12 ch 1,	Nice, great vocabulary. Anyways, I like your title, that's really cool! --Franken--
Brightflower 2004-06-11 ch 1,	Oh, I really like this. What a great haiku!
lipstick stain 2004-06-11 ch 1,	cute.