 A Sweet Escape 2007-07-17 . chapter 1Oh my gosh...that was so sad...I kinda want to cry now and give my mom and dad a big hug.
Nice poem
Katt |
 Willow Bedlam 2006-04-27 . chapter 1Good poem, it's sad but at the same time you can't help but smile cause that's what the little girl does in honor of her mother. |
 urvashti 2005-12-11 . chapter 1*sniffs* i really really like this one. |
 Niki B 2005-06-14 . chapter 1 OH MY GOD! That has to be the saddest piece of work that I have ever read. The only line I don't understand is when the father tells the kid that Mommy will wake up when the kid is asleep. No offence, but that sounds a little bit wrong. Amazing job though.. |
 Babysoft-chan 2004-11-03 . chapter 1Aww... This was so sad, yet so beautiful. Really well written. This is goin' on my fave list. |
 George 2004-08-11 . chapter 1 Your stories and poems are so sad. I'm crying. Does anyone have a tissue? *sobs* |
 Comfy Couch 2004-06-11 . chapter 1great. short and nice. very detailed. :) |