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Reviews For: The Day My Mother Died
A Sweet Escape 2007-07-17 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh...that was so sad...I kinda want to cry now and give my mom and dad a big hug.
Nice poem

Katt
Willow Bedlam 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
Good poem, it's sad but at the same time you can't help but smile cause that's what the little girl does in honor of her mother.
urvashti 2005-12-11 . chapter 1
*sniffs* i really really like this one.
Niki B 2005-06-14 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD! That has to be the saddest piece of work that I have ever read. The only line I don't understand is when the father tells the kid that Mommy will wake up when the kid is asleep. No offence, but that sounds a little bit wrong. Amazing job though..
Babysoft-chan 2004-11-03 . chapter 1
Aww... This was so sad, yet so beautiful. Really well written. This is goin' on my fave list.
George 2004-08-11 . chapter 1
Your stories and poems are so sad. I'm crying. Does anyone have a tissue? *sobs*
Comfy Couch 2004-06-11 . chapter 1
great. short and nice. very detailed. :)
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