Very nice - not cliche'd. My favorite bit is at the beginning: "when the moon can shine without a thin,/ green lining of jealousy"

I love that last stanza... and its nice format and i love all teh references to nature

Very nice--I love your ending. And cliche isn't necessarily bad when you're able to infuse new life into it.
~lyv

Nice~. I really liked this poem, especially the last part. It shows how she's forcingh herself to move on. :)

Is this about Operation Fish? Because it sure sounds like it. It's very nice with repetition to get the point across. I really like it!

not as good as some of your other road/traveling poems, but it's pretty.

This is good, definatelly not cliched at all. Can see a little bit of Romeo and Juliet in there (envious moon) It's still really good though.

that was great. i've beent thinking about some stuff recently and i've been waiting for someone or something to give me an answer...and when i came home to find my only email was from fictionpress with a new poem, i knew it was the answer i was looking for. and it was...so thanks and keep writing, u never know when ur work is need the most for someone, no really...thanks a lot ~CoSyn forever!