::scoffs:: oh you romantics! the imagery's well done, although the fact that you managed to stick the sappiness in such a bitter poem amazes me to no end. again, the capitalization is bothersome, but again, that might just be me.

This has an airy-like quality, very pretty imagery throughout. About the elipses, my rule of thumb is if it can't be a sentence, then they must follow. I learned the hard way through my publisher and editor who said "I overused them." So that's the general rule of thumb. Don't use them if a period or question mark works.
Good poem. Keep writing.