hahahaha! GREAT! (like tony the tiger...)
Sounds like a new anthem to me... (like London Calling by The Clash)

Damn right too! I love, love, love this one! it's incredible, it doesn't have too much rhyme, but just enough to know it's there, and it's got excellent rhythm and flow. Love it!
XCherryX

I like the patterns in this poem, nicely written. I will purposely ignore the contents though. ^^;;

can I make this my anthem? PLEASE? please please pretty please with a bloody cherry on the bottom? pweze??
(obviously, I LOVED it.)