I liked that. It gave me the feel of a quest, of a long journey. Since I'm hardly a poet, I cannot comment on meter or rhyming, but this touched me deeply.
And thanks for the reviews.

I enjoyed the to and fro nature of this poem and the way you described the Magi in a way that only left me asking more questions. As I watched then vanish into the end of your poem, I wondered what they were all about, really, and where they were going.
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Absolutely fascinating - everything I have come to expect from thee.