This is great i can really relate to it...

I can relate this is soo sweet and a real good work!

cute poem :) i know bout missing people, sad... hehe cute poem though.

This so remids me of how I was with one of my boyfriends. I loved him so much and I still do now that me and him are together again. I know how you feel with this one as I learned in the time him and I were apart. THis was wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more form you. Ok I'll go now berfore I end up writing you a novel. lol.

Cute poem...and perfectly fits the mood I'm in. *sighs*
Anyway, nicely done. Keep up the good work.

whoah! you expressed your angst very well...loved how you used repitition to develop your overall mood as well as your choice of words...i hope you let this guy read your work...thanks for sharing and keep writing!