this is one of my favorites of your work... i can compeltely relate... and its very metaphoric but still understandable... awesome job!!

I love this. It's powerful and blends coarse vulgarisms with beautiful metaphors. Has a sense of immediacy that goes with the situation of being held at gunpoint.

"I might be able to dodge the bullet, but I can't dodge your glances"
ANother incredible poem, I'm speechless. I can relate to ur words so much it's creepy. Never stop writing.

Very at odds with yourself. I think in a sense this poem says "I still love you, but ** it, you are no good for me cause you don't love me." Am I right? Good job.

I really like this. It's a great metaphor in the way you described closure as being a gun. The only thing is that the sudden swear words like break the entire mode that you readers get entranced in to.

omg... this was awesome... by the way ive been to boston, and i absolutely fell in love with it... second best city ive visited in the world, the first was copenhagen... this sounded very lyrical... nice job

wow. this poem speaks with so much emotion...it blows me away. keep writing man, you're good.

Raw and powerful, really good work.