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| Melindotty 2004-11-28 ch 1, | I liked it |
| jointedlegs 2004-11-01 ch 1, | Nice nice poem! Everything flowed very nicely but I don't quite get the rhyming scheme...is there one? Anyways, love this one too! |
| cheeseworth 2004-10-15 ch 1, | nice. that was a rather sensitive view to the issue, and i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-10-02 ch 1, | It is a brutal, demoralizing and despairing life to live this way; but for many women it's the only way, you captured the illusion well. ~m~ |
| Caledonia 2004-07-31 ch 1, | This is so cool! How did you write that? |
| charmaine 2004-06-23 ch 1, | It's very realistic and very close to what life is. It shows the hypocritical and materialistic side of men. |
| Treblew 2004-06-14 ch 1, | It's good. My sister thought it was nice too. Why the hell am I a Ron Weasley 5? |
| nasake-suneku 2004-06-14 ch 1, | I liked it. :) |
| Elraralia 2004-06-12 ch 1, | Ooh it's good! Rather dark and everything but I suppose that's the point of it. |