I like it a lot--I love the argument and the end against time being a healer; that was a really good point. :) I also liked the last line of the first verse "And a loving act saved the world." What do you know, it fits perfectly with your other parallels. :) I like this poem--good work! Keep writing! ~MJ
P.S. - Thanks for your reviews!! :)

excellent. I love how you explained love as an ebbing river. Very nice. "one loving handclasp lifts a soul. One loving smile brightens the day." My girlfriend can do that exact thing. just one touch and I feel like i'm up in the clouds. Write more like this. I've never read anything that explained love so well.